Pretty nice job here. the only thing that seems a little off (aside from the arms which you already pointed out) is the shorts. the shading on them is very well done, but they seem to lack definition of her crotch, and with shorts that small and tight its always well defined. otherwise nice work.
No nothing pervy. i mean just that you'd see where the legs meet the hips. it'd be more heavily creased and shadowed. nothing pervy at all. i just ment the anatomy its self.heres an example of that i mean. [link] look at her shorts just the way they it creases from her legs. you had the right idea just some were a little too light to show definition. hopefully that helps. i ment no disrespect at all by my comment, only trying to give constructive criticism.
ooooh, I UNDERSTAND NOW. Yeah, like my other drawings, i need to practice my anatomy! And I didn't take anything wrong, I do appeciate the time you took to give me some advice that I would be able to use! Thank you :}
doesnt look to bad to me, arms seem fine , you did a great job on the hair and overal shading, the only thing i dont like here is that the eyes look a bit dead/empty feeling, but i gues that me due your own mood then .
Nice work on the hair colouring. ^^ The pic looks pretty cool, even though I think the head is a bit big and shoulders- broad especially compared to her hips. It's a girl after all, ne? Maybe it's just the other way around- the body and legs-small, because the upper part looks ok proportion-wise. XD